Some people say that physical exercise should be required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
In this sophisticated world that we live in, although people attend universities or schools to study, physical exercise existence in these places is important too. In my opinion, schools should provide some physical trains or trains for students. it remains to elaborate some merits of this perspective in detail.
First and foremost, what these kinds of activities bring to children is reduce their stress level. having studied in classes, students get bored, and in many cases, curriculums seem to put a heavy burden on children. students get rid of these distressful things by doing some short or long physical activities. For example, studying hard for a whole week causes students to feel depressed, in turning, leading them despite their studies. participating in physical activities, they feel better and they get ready to study more.
Furthermore, the higher rate of physical activity, the better the performance of the brain. t is generally thought that there is a strong relationship between the performance of human beings' brain and their activities. indeed, physical exercises help the student to learn better in their classes and get promoted readily.
Added to these, students find more space to communicate with each other in these kinds of activities. students learn coworking in physical activities and try to make new friendships. In this way, they find it essential to make friends and play as a team player. getting ready in their schools, children enter their society with an insight which helps them to be a social person.
having summarized all the points on physical activities in school days, I can draw a firm conclusion that these activities not only is beneficial for children's advancement but they also help them to have a better performance in school and their societies. Finally, there is a strong suggestion that schools headmasters provide more physical activities for their student because these exercises stimulate children to take part more and more in communicating with each other.
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- Some people say that physical exercise should be required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and example to support your 76
- TPO 33 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, so, for example, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26625386997 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82358712124 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0906230695 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.058823529 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184566445123 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601490122617 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466269253705 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108074587984 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460612484159 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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