Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
In modern society, that all the tasks are machinery is necessary for each personal has a physical exercise in during days. In order to, some people believe that students should have a training sports in the school, whereas, others disagree with this statement. In my opinion, bodily exercise is the best way for student to improve their activities. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, have a training in the school makes students have pleasing mental. Actually, when students take part in the physical exercise, they try to release bad energy from their bodies. For example, last month I had a family problems that made I couldn’t focus on my lessons, thereby, I decided go to thy gym club. For two weeks, every day in the evening I went to the club, ultimately, after that time again I started my courses. After a few days I realized that, my scores are improving, also founded that, I can better focus on my daily activity. According to my experience, as you can see, have physical exercise makes students have the calm mind.
Secondly, some diseases such diabetes and obesity are caused by lack of physical exercise. The results of studies show that one of the most reasons people have diabetes is lack of mobility. Therefore, for this reason people should learn every day have a training. Meantime experts believe that students should exercise every day in the school to reduce rate of obesity at an early age. My childhood's story is compelling evidence what I mean. When, I went to school, always, I participated in the exercise class and tried to carry out each action, which my educator told me. Now I live in modern society, and according to machine life, probably I have illnesses like obesity, but I do not have this problem. Because, after a few days every day I exercise in my home, and this work makes I have healthy life. Better to say that, training that I learned in the school makes now I can live without any diseases. This example describes that attending in the physical exercise in the college or school cause each one has a better lifestyle.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that physical activity should begin in schools for students. This is because have high activities play a role in peace of mind, and this is because exercise prevents from diseases in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s, others disagree with this statement. In my opinion, bodily exercise is the best...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e prevents from diseases in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74695863747 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52767257491 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3372442199 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6818181818 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277375722332 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867470607999 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740451413029 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1701000065 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066821392014 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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