successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. some people think is fully justified while others think it is unfair
Athlete professional gives some benefit for country when they success to be a winner in the competetions, so one of reason people wants for athlete getting the high salary but other works also like doctor, where the doctor works with knowledge and skill also.
A lot of player sport in our country, nevertheless not all of them became succesfull. Player needs more practise to improve their skill. The players also fight become the winner not only for theirselver but also for country. Although player within form groups or solo in tournament which purposing that players is proud their country. Athlete one of way to promote our country and the player obligate to get the high salary. High salary so important for athlete because they hate to protect their body to struggle and guarantee for future live.
On the other hand high salary for sport player is matter for now. However many works can give higest salary for life, like became doctor. Becoming doctor has some differences with player sport for example player football. The differences is about knowledege and skill, for doctor have to has about. When sport profesionall has highest salaryy. It is not deal because make some people want to be player or atlet without has ability and skill. They just look the higest salary. Then giving comfortable for athlete with highs salary, where the people ust work or fight merely, because all of what they want there availabe.
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Sentence: Athlete professional gives some benefit for country when they success to be a winner in the competetions, so one of reason people wants for athlete getting the high salary but other works also like doctor, where the doctor works with knowledge and skill also.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and success
Sentence: Player needs more practise to improve their skill.
Description: The fragment more practise to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace practise with verb, past participle
Sentence: Although player within form groups or solo in tournament which purposing that players is proud their country.
Description: A WH-determiner is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to which and purposing
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to proud and their
Sentence: High salary so important for athlete because they hate to protect their body to struggle and guarantee for future live.
Description: The fragment future live . is rare
Sentence: However many works can give higest salary for life, like became doctor.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to like and became
When sport profesionall has highest salaryy.
When sport profesional has the highest salary.
Sentence: It is not deal because make some people want to be player or atlet without has ability and skill.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to without and has
Sentence: Then giving comfortable for athlete with highs salary, where the people ust work or fight merely, because all of what they want there availabe.
Description: The fragment giving comfortable for is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace comfortable with adverb
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to highs and salary
Sentence: Athlete professional gives some benefit for country when they success to be a winner in the competetions, so one of reason people wants for athlete getting the high salary but other works also like doctor, where the doctor works with knowledge and skill also.
Error: competetions Suggestion: competitions
Sentence: A lot of player sport in our country, nevertheless not all of them became succesfull.
Error: succesfull Suggestion: successful
Sentence: Player needs more practise to improve their skill.
Error: practise Suggestion: practice
Sentence: The players also fight become the winner not only for theirselver but also for country.
Error: theirselver Suggestion: themselves
Sentence: However many works can give higest salary for life, like became doctor.
Error: higest Suggestion: highest
Sentence: The differences is about knowledege and skill, for doctor have to has about.
Error: knowledege Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: When sport profesionall has highest salaryy.
Error: profesionall Suggestion: professional
Error: salaryy Suggestion: salary
Sentence: It is not deal because make some people want to be player or atlet without has ability and skill.
Error: atlet Suggestion: able
Sentence: They just look the higest salary.
Error: higest Suggestion: highest
Sentence: Then giving comfortable for athlete with highs salary, where the people ust work or fight merely, because all of what they want there availabe.
Error: ust Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: availabe Suggestion: available
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Words: 241 350
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 241 350
No. of Characters: 1162 1500
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.94 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.822 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.244 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.91 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.476 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5