The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar charts presents the information related to the numbers of zebras and buffaloes and the amount of the annual rainfall in Nbro Nature Reserve over a period of six years from 2005
Overall, from 2005 to 2011, the number of animals experienced an increasing tendency, meanwhile, the annual rainfall in the reserve showed fluctuations.
With regards to animal numbers, the reserve had the least number of zebras in 2005, with only around 45, and then the number of zebras rose steady more than twice by the year 2011. At the same time, the figure of buffaloes grew significantly from 40 2005 to approximately 120 in 2011. The reserve had the similar numbers of zebras and buffaloes in 2007, while buffaloes outnumbered zebras around 45 in 2009.
There was about 605 millimeters of rainfall in 2005, which was the lowest rate though the whole period, however, the figure doubled to 1200 by 2011. Between 2007 and 2009, the amount of annual rainfall dropped from 1100 millimeters to 700 millimeters.
- The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 76
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different attractions in Bangkok 70
- Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59648418131 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547058823529 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8684485767 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979106461851 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452698106597 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045235770129 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740241698154 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398441592717 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.