DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. IN 20 YEARS LATER THERE WILL BE FEWER CAR IN USE
Nowadays, various transportation vehicles are used by people due to the development of technology.Usage of some vehicles make life easier than the others on traffic.For this reason, I agree with the statement that in twenty years fewer cars will be in use than there are today.I feel this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.(61)
First of all, today more people struggle with the traffic problem and try to find solution to that.They are seeking alternative ways in order to solve this issue.They prefer faster vehicles to go to somewhere they want to go without stopping because of traffic.For instance, subway train is a good option for people who desire faster transportation instead of using cars.It is not only fast but also avoid problems based on weather conditions that make transportation hard sometimes.Thus, more people prefers different choices such as metro instead of using cars because of reasons above mentioned.
Second point is augmentation of cost.The cost of transportation is increasing gradually all over the world.Some people have cars even more than one in their home so this augments the cost in terms of household economy.However, in recent years some solutions have been created .In big cities,different people associate using one car to go to same directions.As a result, this model may become more common in the future.
The last but not least, parking spaces are gradually decreasing especially in big cities.That brings about parking problems for people who use cars.It has impact on the decision where people go in some situtations.For example, there is parking problem significantly so when i go to there i prefer metro or public transportations without looking for a parking place.
To sum up, although cars are much used vehicles, there will be decrease in usage of them in the future.I strongly believe that people will find alternative ways for travelling much faster, more comfortable with minimum cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21630094044 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04927545446 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 20.1344086022 392% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 280.505236137 48.9658058833 573% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 416.0 100.406767564 414% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.75 20.6045352989 387% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.0 5.45110844103 642% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151371252872 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957259442857 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539144341716 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997549034708 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728116131649 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.0 11.7677419355 365% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.71 58.1214874552 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 10.1575268817 336% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.18 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.01818996416 144% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.002688172 550% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.0537634409 334% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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