Nowadays buy more and more things things which are unnecessary why it so happening
Fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, is encouraged. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
The use of alternative sources of energy in replacing fossil fuel has become a positive trend of development in some countries in recent years, and there are reasons to encourage this trend.
Firstly, alternative resources including solar power or wind energy are more friendly to the environment than using fossil fuels. The amount of pollution that comes directly from the act of exploiting fossil fuel like oil, coal, gas is significant, and that is not include the emission and waste result from the act of using it. However, the rate can decrease by using the alternative resources which can be construed as green energy. The process of producing such energy is simple. For example, to use solar power, the solar panels can be constructed on the roof of a house or wherever there is a wide space which can absorb the heat from the sun while in Dutch, wind turbines are built to transfer wind energy. Evidently, the green energy is not only eco-friendly but also accessible.
Dissimilar to fossil fuel, this green energy like solar or wind is unlimited. When the limit use of fossil fuel is a demanding issue, the appearance of alternative sources of energy addresses such issue as a superior choice. With the advantages as healthy to the ecosystem and limitless resources, there is no surprised why the type of energy is chosen by many European countries and others.
In conclusion, it cannot be argued that the advantages of the alternative sources of energy has outweighed that of fossil fuels. there is no doubt that in the future, this trend may be widely spread. If that really happen, the environment can be saved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...al, gas is significant, and that is not include the emission and waste result from the ...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88086642599 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67594514176 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509025270758 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0732945146 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276456499812 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932141572558 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690609628283 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150933433033 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793530357313 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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