It is common for most of countries to set retirement age which is 65 generally. Some people believe senior citizens over this age should be stopped to work, while others have converse opinion. I am unsure whether this is benefits for old generations or not, and will, examine the both side views and express my opinion.
One of the advantages while people are getting old is the experiences that people gained in their life. Maybe people cannot work hard as if they were young, but the way to handle job itself is much easier than young fellow. For instance, elder person who has their own methods to confront the tasks. Youngsters are more likely to research online or ask someone`s advises to spend numerous time to find the right answer, which the senior already knew. Another significant reasons in favour is that some of old people work in a company for long time and know it very well so they become decision maker or voice sender. Remain them in the work is the fortune of organization.
The drawback of allow people work in old age is their lack of concentration and memory. Besides, the decreased physical ability could cause some problems. For example, people who has job in the concentration site can bring some unsafe situation to themselves and effect the co-worker around them. Moreover, there is no chance for young people get promotion if the older people stay in most of position. It will effect the future of company as well.
In conclusion, my suggestion is that old people who over 65 to contribute their experiences in one organization or company is the better choice, also leave most chances for youngsters to fight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
It is common for most of countries to set retirement age which is 65 gener...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...ch online or ask someone's advises to spend numerous time to find the right answer,...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...ple work in a company for long time and know it very well so they become decision ma...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...e problems. For example, people who has job in the concentration site can bring som...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding co-worker'?
Suggestion: the surrounding co-worker
...safe situation to themselves and effect the co-worker around them. Moreover, there is no chance for young...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...eople stay in most of position. It will effect the future of company as well. In co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82042253521 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57084455343 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9695822125 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241666303495 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792198910371 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942931075747 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142963671071 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803632732082 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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