It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.Do you agree or disagree?Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
Now a days, cities has a lot of difficulties like traficgams, air poloution, nois, etc. So people has lot of problem like lak of time, disease, mental problem. Hence some people prefer to stay out of the cities and have calm and peasful life. besides of that they have enough time to spend with thier families and raise their children. other people like to stay at the cities becuase of cities facilities and services for their children. these two idea has different reason and it will be describe in the next paragraph.
As it is mentioned above, some people like to live in the countryside of the city because of lots of reason. they dont like to waste their time in the trafic, they perefer to breath fresh air, they like to spend time with their families and specificly with their children. they like to see how their children grow up and play with them. send them to school, make better condition for them to raise.
on the other hand, other ones dont like to stay at subereb and they dont like has routin life. Also, they afraid if they live in the countrieside, thier children cant use services and facilities which is ready for them in the city. they think its better for their children to send them to the best classes in the cities, prepare them the best thing and make comfortable atmospher for them.
in conclusion, both of the group concern about their children and they tried to make best condition for their child. But they should check their priorities and find the best one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60074626866 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23453261312 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492537313433 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5794588653 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116329708033 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462237763676 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401265861103 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766259276275 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032991762737 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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