The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
these four chart illustrate group age (bellow 14-year-old, between 15 to 59-year-old and more than 60-year-old) portion of Yemen and Italy population in 2000 and 2050.
As shown Yemeni pie chart, in 2000 about 50.1% of their population has less than 14-year-old. Also 46.3% of them are between 15 to 59-year-old and only 3.6% of their population have more than 60 years old. however in 2050 population of first group decreased to 37% and percentage of second one reach to 57.3% and the last one their population increased to5.7%.
The next two chart which are show the Italian age group portion are different from Yemen chart. the crowded group is 15 to 59 years old by 61.6%, and the next group is oldest one by 24.1% and the las group is youngest one by 14.3% in 2000. on the other hand in 2050 the population of old group increased to 42.3% and the middle age group population decreased to 46.2% and youngest one decreased to 11.5%.
overall, these charts show that both of these two countries age increased and they should manage that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73224043716 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45318068924 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51912568306 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1761889218 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13786679562 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761689101324 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392193912303 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948243113953 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283482726159 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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