In recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and solution.
recently crime is increased in the world, people do different crime like kinlling people, rub something, etc. this behavior has lots of reason, but this issue increased between between young people and sometimes children and its horibol. In this manuscript we will describe the reason of these problem and then find a way to solve this.
as it is mentioned above, crime between the young people increased and the firs reason of that is governments. because they dont care about the families, Hence some familiese cant control their children and they dont have enough time to teach them the life style. on the other hand, some young people when they went to the society, they learn bad thing from their friends or classmate. So their family cant control them and their bahavior change. also, new technology push people to bad behavior and we will affected from the advertisement and some films. I believe all of these reason has soloution and we will talk about them in the next paragraph.
the first reaon of the worst behavior of youn man and woman is governments. if governments dont care about the society and families and dont establish a program for them, they destroied and the speciphic part of our society changed. they should advertise about families, how to manage familiy member, etc. also they should inform people about new technologies and how to affect on them.
i think all of the problem has one reason, "government" and if we want to have ideal society we should change our government manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95348837209 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62406249623 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9030751842 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145536407311 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578355204182 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660975876846 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930348621013 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093147260306 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.