Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environment problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People argue whether the disappearing of some plants and animals is the major environmental issue or there are more matters that can be more urgent. In my opinion, although the extinction of these creatures can be a serious problem, other issues like pollution and global warming are more important.
There are reasons why some people prioritize the problem of extinction of some plants and animals. First, the rate of extinction and the number of wild animals and rare plants that went extinct have increased significantly in recent decades. In fact, according to a research made by Mauna University in Holland, the human race has observed twice that many of species disappearing in the 21st century compared to the 19th century. Second, the loss of these plants and animals is detrimental to our ecosystem. Since maintaining the balance of our ecosystem is extremely vital, failing to do that can seriously worsen the global warming, which in the worst case scenario can massively destroy the earth.
However, there are other urgent issues that worth more attention than the disappearing of some species. The top one problem of our time must be pollution. This matter is now spreading all over the world and negatively and directly affects everyone on earth by worsening people’s health and significantly increasing cost in dealing with it. In addition, global warming is also a core problem that we should prioritize. The result of global warming is not only the extreme weather but also deadly catastrophes that can kill thousands of people and animals and massively destroy hundreds of buildings in a minute, which sadly happen more frequently in the last century.
In conclusion, even though some people think the loss of some particular species including plants and animals is the major issue, I believe there are more urgent matter of our environment that we should prioritize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17532467532 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75327738282 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8860337163 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.615384615 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244148688362 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093360531366 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728065560062 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165610517454 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460130279143 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.