Today business along with earning money they also do have great responsibilty of society namely economic growth,social welfare and many more.I completely agree with the statements and this essay will represents the reason why.
First of all, business have a vital role in the society that contribute on social welfare and environment. They provide empolyment oppurtunity to many people and helps to reduce poverty rate.In by gone days many knowlegebale people on certain field are suffering from unemployemnt but today due to establishment of many marketking field they have positive impact on the development works by doing their duties properly beside making money. In additional, commercial group are using local resource so that the local people can also earn money by dealing with those business holder people. Therefore, this practise increase the economic rate and maintain the bugdet.
Furthermore, Bussiness runner also involve in charity events. They donate huge amount for the infrastructer development of the society. For intsance in my town road construction work had been complete with the help of traders.Moreover, they also associate with organization and conduct various awareness programme to encourage many youth to particiapte in development work.
To sum up, I totally opine that Business do not only make money they do have many authorities of the society. Many societies have been develop because of the businesshodlers actively engage in their social duty beside the money making.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54310344828 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96229526252 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0250557869 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252797711866 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102009660624 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824927478014 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169698890188 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835317007573 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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