The diagram describes the process of manufacturing cement and the way of using cement to produce concrete. Overall, cement production process consists of 4 stages and used several equipments whereas process of making concrete account 15 % of cement, used number of tools and made in concrete mixer.
In the first stage of the diagram, it can be seen that lime stone and clay crushed in a crusher and formed powder. Then, combined the powder into the mixer and passes to the rotating heat that produced heat at the buttom of the cylinder. Next, the resulting mixture placed over the grinder and grind in order to produce cement. Finally, it is put inside the bag and ready for use.
Regarding the second diagram, While producing concrete it account 15 % cement, 10% water, 50 % gravel and 25% sand that is mixed in concrete mixer and rotate until it became concrete. When the process is compelete then we can use it for builing purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...stone and clay crushed to form a powder.Then, combined the powder into the mixer and...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...xer and rotate until it became concrete.When the process is compelete then we acn us...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'readies'?
Suggestion: readies
...process is compelete then we acn use it ready for builing purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, then, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93793103448 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54829179812 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4072770658 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154379677345 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797295763502 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702728456584 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102904188954 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706614996306 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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