Education is important to every human beings and the courses are available for both male anf female whereas both have rights to choose the subjests of their interest.Some people arguew that tertiary education should accept them equally in every courses.I completely agree with the statements and this essay will disscuss the reasons,
The most compelling reason for holding my reason is that universisties should provide courses for male and female without any discrimination along with encouraging female to choose course without any hesitation that they could compete the male in those subject. For instance boys are more involve in mathematics and indicate themselves as superior tha female. So to remove this attitude girls should be persudaed to take difficult subject eually. If it is happen there wont be feeling of bias in their subjest and number of women engage in competitive subjects will be increase.
Another reason for holing my position is that because of universities acceptance ofequal number of male and female, today root of dicrinination had been eradicated and its aslo contribtued on the development of society. For instance Female involve in civil enginnering equally as man do and both did well as a result many positive chages can be seen in the society.
To sump up, Universities courses should provide equally to both gender.To make female superior in every course it should be provide for them by ministry of eductaion so that after high school graduation they can choose courses like computer engineer, architecture and civil engineer with the support of universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, whereas, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30588235294 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79559713153 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.650465733 49.4020404114 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.285714286 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4285714286 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245653596526 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967868634133 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574444728439 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148030312662 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137047232016 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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