The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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...tes the temperature based on monthly and total annual hours of sunshine in Londo...
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...y and total annual hours of sunshine in London, Newyork and sydney. Overall,i...
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... London, Newyork and sydney. Overall,it can be seen that Newyork and London Exp...
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...hereas in Sydney fluctuation happened in temperature. On the other hand, Newyork ...
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...highest number of hours of sunshine than two cities. It clearly shows that, Ne...
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...ary temperature is 4 and 8 respectively.Subsequently, in july the temeprature rose upto near...
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...re rose upto nearly 30 at newyork and 24 at London while it remained stable till ...
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...t remained stable till the month August.On contrary to this both cities temepratur...
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... beginging of the month 26 respectively.Then in the middle of the month july tempera...
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... With regard to yearly hours of sunnyday , Newyork got 2535 which was on the highe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, then, whereas, while, in addition, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98994974874 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16953860996 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552763819095 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.314427445 43.030603864 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.857142857 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203478524404 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111726589758 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735880201309 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144564365245 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602172810168 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.