Today homework has become one the most mandatory task and study culture which is needed to student to revise their courses at home. Moreover, teacher gives homework to pupils inorder to ehance their skill and improve their academic performance in upcomig exams and parents are also appreciate with this practise because it keeps their childen busy in studies ratner than other unnecessary activities.
Doing Homework is important as it helps to stay in touch with syllabus that has been taught in classroom and they will be more responsible to do their task studies Hence this helps them more easier to understand and prepare for next day for another lessons. In additional, it helps to know the student up to date progress. For instance solving mathematics problem at home alone lead them to find answers by their own and student can get feedback from their tutor in errors which improves their study.
However homework should be removed as student spend more time at school. And after school they need more leisure time for playing and extra curriculum rather than invovling in school task. Revision of the class can be add at the end of the school hours so that the pupils revise the day lesson at school and return home without worrying about the homework. Moreover, student need more extra time for themselves instead of engaging in homework because it makes them relax after spending whole day at school and rejuvinate themselves so that they will be refresh for next day. This will help them to focus more and improve their productivity.
To sum up, In my opinion homework should be vanished and student should have quality time in playing and other activities. After school hours they can enjoy their company with family and friends rather than doing school task.
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 78
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. 56
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...e in upcomig exams and parents are also appreciate with this practise because it keeps the...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...heir task studies Hence this helps them more easier to understand and prepare for next day ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to understand and prepare for next day for another lessons. In additional, it h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e lead them to find answers by their own and student can get feedback from their ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...n errors which improves their study. However homework should be removed as student s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n school task. Revision of the class can be add at the end of the school hours so...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mprove their productivity. To sum up, In my opinion homework should be vanishe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31969155126 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5457572234 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303227566262 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125713438752 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761185437969 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195869413322 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406460460649 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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