some people believe that the government should not spend too much money on outer space exploration. Do you agree or disagree?
Research and development have unturned astonishing mysteries of the universe, enabling human beings to become their own bosses. Space exploration is one such field which involves studying the starts and planets to reveal the hidden secrets between them. However, such space researches require a massive amount of government funding and resources. So, the question arises, should a developing country like mine, spend money on space exploration?
In my string perspective, my country should undoubtedly spend money on space researches and endeavour to be a developed nation soon. My view is supported by a few noticeable reasons. Fundamentally, the widespread technological inventions, that has strengthened the communication channels are the most useful outcome of such research. Ranging from television to mobile phones and the internet, such researches have truly made the world a global village.
Another feature of space researches which certainly put them in the positive light is its role in safeguarding the nation by strengthening the defence forces. As a result, various satellites hovering around the borders, it becomes quite easy to catch hold of a foul play, if any. Thereby making the country safe to live. In addition to this, the numerous benefits in weather forecasting, navigation and various other discoveries can certainly not be ignored. All in all, spending money on space exploration would definitively be lucrative.
My view is bolstered upon by a few more forthcoming benefits that we have in the future besides the above-mentioned ones. To begin with, space exploration can help us find life on other planets which is the need of the hour keeping in mind that earth is on the verge of destruction. Nevertheless, scientists have revealed the possibilities of utilizing the rich minerals and rocks found in space for treating some fatal diseases like cancer.
In a nutshell, all the above-stated reasons clearly justify my belief that it is undisputably worthwhile to invest in the realm of space research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40438871473 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08854278106 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611285266458 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0437196048 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.411764706 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129346384831 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416576860305 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535641824746 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695787665912 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307562574113 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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