You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organizer.
Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter
• expressing your interest in the role
• requesting more information about it
• explaining what experience you have
Dear Sir,
This is in connection to the training programme in the UK and a social event organizer is required for the same. I would like to mention that I have a keen interest in this role as I have a prior experience in shaping the events.
I would like to understand in detail about the requirements so that I can plan the things accordingly in respect to my training timings. I would assure that my training part will not get affected in my planning. In my last company when I visited USA and UK for the trainings, I was the organizer of the event and was awarded by my CEO for the best planning. Moreover, my family is into the business of organizing events and exhibitions so I am well aware of the supplies and vendors.
Request you to kindly give me an opportunity to prove myself. Look forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Megha Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ngly in respect to my training timings. I would assure that my training part will...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y last company when I visited USA and UK for the trainings, I was the organizer o...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4875 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6930466019 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0669193312 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7777777778 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183201219385 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738689190759 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454282727718 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10302794157 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515336203717 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.