You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser.
Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter
• expressing your interest in the role
• requesting more information about it
• explaining what experience you have
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about your volunteering training course in UK so that I can take well preparation for that.
It has been my passion always to take part in social activities and guide others. Even in this program I really want to be the leader to make it successful. I am very much keen to take responsibility of this team during the whole period and acquire new knowledge.
I read a bit about this course which is not enough for the head to run the group. So, my humble request to provide me details information of the program such as how to join and what to learn.
I believe, my previous achievement will help you to take decision on me. I different types of volunteer work in cultural programs, health campaigns, environmental awareness programs etc. in different parts of my country.
I will look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Md. Shawan Shahriar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...c. in different parts of my country. I will look forward to hearing from you a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82098765432 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85052210996 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5975764029 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116829234885 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040570382264 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427705835686 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633695528859 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490202173872 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.