You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apologize for not being able to enter into the flat I have taken in rent though I supposed to shift here next month.
Last week I have visited your house and found the accommodation convenient which exactly what I was looking for. Though the rent is bit higher comparing to other location, we negotiated and fixed it at some point. Even I have paid for three months up front and confirmed that I will move here in next month.
I need to live there because I got a job confirmation letter and my office is in that location. So, a nearby home will save my valuable time. It was said that my joining will be on first week of next month but due to some complications I have been informed that my starting day will be fixed after next month.
In this confusing situation I decided not to move in your house next month rather let me be sure first. But I have been assured that I am selected for this job and hope after a month I will start the job from your apartment which I have taken on rent.
I would be grateful if you consider my situation and allow me one-month extension for final confirmation.
Will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Md. Shawan Shahriar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...t I was looking for. Though the rent is bit higher comparing to other location, we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45814977974 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45771552857 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4855083813 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306896401597 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104781046835 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464961974957 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14939271992 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256398033167 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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