Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner.
Discuss both systems.
You should write at least 250 words.
Marriage is a worldwide accepted constitution for a couple to share their life together. The tradition of arranging marriage by the guardians are continuing from our ancestor but from last few years there is some changes. Now in many countries people prefer to choose their life partner by their own. Following paragraphs will put some sheds on both view.
Firstly, marriage is the most significant decision to someone’s life and it is believed that the parents can decide this wisely. Secondly, in lots of family’s conservative behavior is maintained which does not allow an individual to select their mate. Finally, to maintain the tradition, adults people leave the responsibility on their father or mother because they have been taught that their parents have done the same when they were getting married. For example, Country like Bangladesh, Pakistan where religious values are on top priority usually marriage are organized by guardians as this is the best way their religion allow.
With the development of technology and cultural mixture, a major change has come in wedding system in many parts of the worlds. Because of advanced devices like laptop, internet people can communicate any person living at distance which was not possible in the past. This helps to know each other more deeply and find the right partner for whole life. Moreover, improvement in transportation allows people to travel other nations and enjoy their lifestyle which ultimately open the door to choose and be with someone forever. For instance, in most developed country like USA and Canada people like to meet with different types of people and get married with the suitable one.
In conclusion, happiness comes when we can share our feelings with someone. And marriage is the divine process to get that special person no matter it is arranged by our parents or we find out by ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some changes'?
Suggestion: there are some changes
...om our ancestor but from last few years there is some changes. Now in many countries people prefer to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15584415584 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69453918261 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4406835858 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.866666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240072620807 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768173824562 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413090849996 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142096969529 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506814803976 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.