Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before
technological advancements have afforded people more opportunities to enjoy leisure time. In my opinion, I partially agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, it is undeniable the importance of modern electronic devices for human life.Thanks to modern technology, life has become faster, easier and more convenient. For example, instead of going to shopping malls or supermarkets to buy food and necessary items, people may easily access to commercial websites such as Lazara or Ebay and order anything they need only by a click mouse. In addtion, modern technology has liberated people from manual labor jobs which occupy a large part of their daily time. For instance, the time production of a car has decreased owing to the robotics technology and conveyor belt which allowed mass production.
On the other hand, some people become over-reliant on high-tech devices, so they find hardly for leisure activities. The fast-paced life together with the competitive working environment today required people need to work harder otherwise they will be get fired. As a result, they often glue their eyes to screen with a hectic schedule without much time for recreational activities. Besides, the emergence of social network websites as well as game online are attracted lots of interests of youngsters, making them spend most of time on it instead of attending outdoor activities. Consequently, they tend to immerse into a sedentary lifestyle, leading to health problems such as obesity or diabetes.
In conclusion, I agree that the amount of leisure time of humans has risen due to modern technology. However, in another aspect, many people are still up to their ears in deadlines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technological
technological advancements have afforded people more ...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...echnological advancements have afforded people more opportunities to enjoy leisure tim...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thanks
...odern electronic devices for human life.Thanks to modern technology, life has become f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25830258303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88627411854 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645756457565 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2816429836 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18387754888 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706921161902 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076339760403 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134142807448 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591921970144 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.