Many doctors say that poplin today's world do not do enough exercise.What do think are the causes this? What solutions are there to this problem?

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Many doctors say that poplin today's world do not do enough exercise.What do think are the causes this? What solutions are there to this problem?

Physical exercise is very important to stay fit.In many countries doctors opine that people are not getting enough time for physical exercise.There are several causes behind this problem and fortunately there are several solutions too.The upcoming paragraphs will elaborate the causes and solutions with relents examples.

To begin with, Main reason for the unhealthy habit is influence of technology in all aspects of life.The friendly technology has quickly replaced the old ways where physical strength was involved.All the new buildings has provided elevators where people prefers to climb stairs in old-time, young generations also prefers to stay at home to play video games instead of getting involved in outdoor activities.

As we all know our body needs to active if we do not do some exercise we will have some serious health issues.We should motivate our young generations to go out and play outdoor games.
In conclusion,We all know physical activities are important in our life, we have to change our lifestyle by taking out some time from the busy schedule for some recreational activities.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78624024339 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.1117763476 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 234.25 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.75 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121062062727 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689698707803 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075024776698 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689698707803 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075024776698 0.056905535591 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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