Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Wild animals protection is an alarming agenda and always grabs attention by socialists or commoners on international or local platforms. Zoos are being used to protect wild animals all across the world and people are found divided in two groups, half of them find zoos as anti-social and insance whereas rest find it purposeful. In this essay, i will discuss both sides and end up with my own opinion.
To start with, people who are against of barricading animals in the zoos, consider this act of cruelity. According to them, zoos are unable to provide animals basic right of freedom which is quite inhuman act og human nature. Wild animals die inside zoo before their age because of unnatural habbitat. Often its noticed zoos dont have sufficient funds and food to feed such animals which leeds to week and unhealthy life of them whereas zoos want to showcase them for their commercial benefits. All these factors indicates why majoirty of people in favor of shut down on zoos.
On the flip side of the coin, people who are in favor of zoos have their own logics and strong points too. Hunting of wild animals by humans for fun and greed is world wide known due to his insane act many species are at verge of distinict. Govenments and private bodies who runs zoos are well aware of such crime thats the reason they give shealter to rare breeds and endangered species. Also not to forgot zoos are magnificant source of education for younger generation as they learn lot of about them and gradually they developed their liking in animals.
To sum up, both parties have their own reasons and justifications in favor or against of zoos. I personally believe zoos are indispensible part of any country or community as it bring us closer to varies kind of species but not to forget, zoo authorities have to play vital role for their upbringing.
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also, but, if, so, well, whereas, kind of, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72670807453 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47255683178 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4288063903 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215859530276 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793825366063 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462304264316 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132833976696 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202820631737 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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