Are quick decisions always wrong?
People are making decisions all the time during their life time but the point is what kind of decisions are they making in fact how important the decision would be? Is it that important so could have a big effect on their lives? In this circumstances making quick decision won’t be a good idea because people should think carefully and analyze every single details because a minuscule mistake would cause hazard in their lives. For this reason, they should be vigorous and prime their mind to focus on dominant issues. Besides, decisions should not be dramatically at all and must be made completely logical.
As an example in such situation we can mention immigration which almost is one of the hardest decisions that a human ever can make.
When someone wants to immigrate should search everything about that country especially the language! He should know that whether he is capable of learning the language or not?! Since the language of each country is the main point for immigration. If he doesn’t know the language he can’t communicate and more importantly he couldn’t find an appropriate job As a result, it is vital for him to start searching and learning the language which takes a long road and that is a very beginning for him
In contrast sometimes there is distinct situations that are not elaborate like buying a dress for a gala which is a rudimentary issue, and may not cause harm to our lives if we choose the golden or the black dress.
Generally I would prefer to consider carefully, and not making decisions fast so I won’t be regretted in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are distinct situations'?
Suggestion: there are distinct situations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, in contrast, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86181818182 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72508033091 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.473362421 48.9658058833 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.555555556 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111074463889 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530648977286 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541088310392 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560370129729 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535380670347 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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