Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world."
Internet is vast pool of undiminishing knowledge. People acquire knowledge from different sources, internet act as a key part for distribution and source of knowledge. I agree with the statement provided about positivity of Internet. As Internet resulted in so many positive effects, providing a major impact on education, healthcare, finance, government etc.
Firstly, Most positive impact can be classified over distant learning, students or busy workers exhibiting a passion for study can exploit internets ability to provide digital learning. For instance, According to 2019 educational survey wide majority of people were involved in the distant learning than direct learning. This evidence is providing strength of positive effect of internet across a life of millions of people.
I also believe with wide amount of Knowledge availability internet bolsterd it’s roots to enhance the affirmative communication effect. For example, Various Newsletter, Blog posts, e-marketing, e-newspapers keep users up to date every second. The Wall Street Journal providing different digital editions, acting as a widespread source of articulate information. Moreover, The amount of information extracted each day is colossal and simplifying the complexity of tasks.
Essentially, Internet is mostly providing a beam for knowledge seekers, acting as a source of helping hand, providing useful information at a brink of seconds. However, there are certain devastating impacts of social media over the internet but in my opinion internet effects very positively.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-01-17 | Kalima | 60 | view |
| 2019-11-26 | nolo | 76 | view |
| 2019-11-26 | nolo | 76 | view |
| 2019-11-10 | Vaibhav Panchal | 68 | view |
| 2019-11-10 | masoumsaie | 70 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 43.0788530466 12% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 228.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86403508772 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09278330254 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3009651908 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196724407144 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771925256251 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076171402483 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118272412862 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271809866017 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 58.1214874552 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 10.9000537634 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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