All over the world, almost every country has its own low enforcement system. Although, measures of punishment are differ from system to system, many governments use similar penalty for equal crimes and one of the most popular one is imprisonment. Some people believe that this measure should be applied in all criminal cases, whereas others are ton agree with this option. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
I strongly agree that surrounding is a crucial part of our live affecting its different areas. This means, that in case when every offender is sentenced to prison, they inevitably become surround by people who are definitely not the best candidates to look up to. Especially this might be harmful for youngsters and individuals who committed offence first time, because these people are usually between to minds about their future and have a huge chance to be rehabilitated.
Another reason why I do not consider prison as a best option to punish delinquents is huge amount of tax payer’s money which government spend on environment where inmates are kept. This expenditure include clothing and meal for prisoners as well as salary for staff working in prison and so on. I think, government can sentence those who committed petty crimes to social work instead. Not only will it save tax payers’ money, but also it will help state’s budget.
On the other hand, I think that all people who are responsible for violent crime such as murder, should be kept isolated from society. I strongly believe that government should not jeopardize citizens’ safety in favor of saving budget’s money or trying re-educate criminals.
To sum up, there is no doubt that prison is the most acceptable option for people who committed violent crimes in terms of safety for society. However, I don’t consider this type of penalty to be the best option for all delinquents. I believe that for offends like street robbery or tax evasion should be applied another penalty. In my view, this can help to reduce the risk of reoccurrence and will give individuals who committed minor crime a chance to rehabilitate effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...m. Although, measures of punishment are differ from system to system, many governments...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... reason why I do not consider prison as a best option to punish delinquents is hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06077348066 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78807434739 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582872928177 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3999104209 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266807710083 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826914942885 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945238758574 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14499449595 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398743339482 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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