New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Human beings have obtained many significant breakthroughs in terms of technology, including the internet which alters everything radically but the most salient one is the way that children today spend their free time after the appearance of the internet and other new technologies as well. like two sides of the coin, there are both advantages and disadvantages when they consume their spare time on the internet , which is analyzed from my point of view in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, in respect of benefits, young children exposing to advanced technology like internet give to help them have early preparations for mixing with a very high-tech society later. To put that in perspective, it is like the platform for their future. Especially, for the children who are interested in this technology, to approach the internet is also how to realize early their passion such as coding, network security, hacking, etc. For instance, between the candidate who is good at technological skills like computer science and the one does not know about such things at all. the employer has the inclination about the first person. Moreover, children could be developed about the aspect of thought as well as their creation and the flexibility of senses through many beneficial games.
On the other hand, the internet in general and games in particular are highly addictive, which makes them lost control and spend hours and hours on it. As a result, it has serious consequences for their health such as myopia, obesity, even depression and others. Furthermore, spending too much time on internet also influences their daily activities. To show, many young teenagers fall down in their study at school and miss out plans because of being addicted to games or the internet. Besides, children are not mature enough to conceive a series of harmful things existing on the internet, so they easily misinterpret their perceptions.
In conclusion, any technology also endure its two sides, therefore, becoming helpful or detrimental rely on how everyone uses it. after all, human makes all the decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, after all, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19526627219 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79911316348 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600591715976 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4576619535 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4666666667 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244200065794 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699113137172 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635702466537 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136940801535 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914673679108 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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