Your landlord wants to increase the rent. Write a letter to him telling him why you think rent should not be increased and what will you do if it's increased.
Dear Mr. Kumar,
I am writing to request you to keep the rent unchanged for the coming year, unlike your yearly policy to increase it by 10%.
I am staying at flat 102, BKC apartment. Having stayed here for 3 years, its been like a known feeling for me. Every year there has been an increment of 10% in the rent and I have adhered to it, but this time I am requesting you to not to increase it.
There has been a reduction of rent in nearby areas and people have managed to get it at reduced prices. Since I am staying at this place from a long time and paying the rent regularly, I would not like to get the rent reduced nor increased. If you still wish to increase the rent, I would be forced to search for a new Landlord. The increased amount will not be in my affordable range, and I will have to look for the new place.
If you have any concern, do let me know
Hoping for a positive reply.
Yours sincerely
John Patel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ur yearly policy to increase it by 10%. I am staying at flat 102, BKC apartment....
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Suggestion:
...m requesting you to not to increase it. There has been a reduction of rent in ne...
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Suggestion:
...reply. Yours sincerely John Patel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19230769231 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21453111284 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5880810614 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256826684319 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104180079907 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803526582682 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129170038839 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879139304998 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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