The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram explains a way in which chocolate is manufactured. Overall, the process consists of ten stages from the beginning of cacao tree and ending up with the culmination of the product.
To begin, the cocoa comes from cacao tree which is grown in South America, Africa and the country of Indonesia. It has pods and when the pods are ripen it is ready for harvest. Then white cocoa beans will undergo to fermentation. After that beans were need to spread and it has to dry by the help of the sun. Next is, it has to put into a large sack and delivered the dry beans to the factory using the train or lorry for transportation.
In the next stage, beans were roasted in heating area with the temperature of 350 degree Celsius. Following this the beans needs to crushed to removed the outer shell. In the last stage the inner part is pressed and the chocolate is produced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ripened'.
Suggestion: ripened
...esia. It has pods and when the pods are ripen it is ready for harvest. Then white coc...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re of 350 degree Celsius. Following this the beans needs to crushed to removed th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46931164497 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2108756054 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0285793777198 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0143546372109 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304850256662 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0227795404525 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174487762584 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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