The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by a car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the reasons of why people using a bicycle or a car when travelling to work.
Overall, health and fitness and less population are the main reason of individuals for using a bicycle to work. While, comfort is the most reason of people using a car going to work.
Firstly, health and fitness and less population are the highest percentage of people why they used a bicycle it is accounted for 30%. While, some people says that there is no parking problems which is 15%. The least reasons for using a bicycle is no costs and faster with the percentage of 13% and 12%.
In contrast, people most reason why they are using the car travelling to work is comfort which 40%. While the others reason is the distance to work for like 21%. Another reasons are faster than cycling and need to carry things to work with the same percentage of 14% each. Also the least reason is safer than cycling with exact percentage of 11%, respectively.
- The Bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams by subject and gender during the period 2010 2011 77
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 85
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by a car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ndividuals for using a bicycle to work. While, comfort is the most reason of people u...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a car going to work. Firstly, health and fitness and less population are the ...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...used a bicycle it is accounted for 30%. While, some people says that there is no park...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...k with the same percentage of 14% each. Also the least reason is safer than cycling ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70175438596 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37472988354 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461988304094 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1329127193 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263941678846 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131184624955 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962387832735 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21417285923 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902655412108 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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