Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, people have their own freedom to work and live anywhere they want due to advanced in technology and transportation. However, some people may not be able to apply this in their current situation due to some reasons. This essay will explain the benefits of advanced technology more than the drawbacks of technology development.
To start with, there are lots of modern technology that can people benefit with this in our modern society. For instance, individuals can work to their home and no longer be able to go in their workplace. Another is they can avoid the traffic jam on the road. While at home they can use their modern mobile phones or gadgets with a high speed WiFi to communicate with their boss,supervisors, and managers. They can save money to transportation fee if people work from home. The most advantage of the people working from home is they have more time to family bonding because they can manage their schedule. Most of the people can work and live abroad it is applicable these days and their communication is not a hinder because of the advanced technology.
Apparently, there are also disadvantages when it comes to advanced technology. For example, there will be no human to human interaction and socialization could be the problem. Another one is if the people cannot afford to buy modern mobile phones or laptop then they have no choice but to come in their workplace. Last is they cannot organize their schedule to work and to their families.
In conclusion, modern technologies can make people work easier without experiencing the toxic life environment. More importantly is people should have a discipline in using the modernization of technology today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , supervisors
...iFi to communicate with their boss,supervisors, and managers. They can save money to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21071428571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15455614783 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1469358901 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255784381922 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989023387205 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901310050417 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171059885565 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800569128299 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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