Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
<p style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(66, 66, 66); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">These days many people choose to live or work in other countries, which has been made possible because of the convenience of air travel and modern communications. I believe that this has more benefits than drawbacks. <br></p><p style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(66, 66, 66); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">The disadvantage of this development is the distance that is put between family members. If a person moves away it is true that air travel and devices such as skype mean that communication and contact can be maintained. However, it is likely that a person will only be able to return one or two times a year during holidays, and speaking on skype or via email is not the same as face-to-face contact. <br></p><p style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(66, 66, 66); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">Despite this, there are significant advantages it can bring to people’s lives. Firstly, it means that people have the opportunity to see other parts of the world and the way people live. For example, people from the West often go to work in Asia or the Middle East and visa-versa. This enriches many people’s lives as they get to learn about other languages, traditions, cultures and different ways of working from their own country. <br></p><p style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(66, 66, 66); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">In addition to this, on a wider level it may also benefit other countries. If someone moves abroad for work, it is usually because their skill is required there. To illustrate, nurses and Doctors often move to work in hospitals in other countries when there is a shortage, so this is very valuable to the place they move to. <br></p><p style="margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(66, 66, 66); font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">I would therefore argue that although there are disadvantages of the current trend to live and work abroad, they are outweighed by the advantages. It can enrich people’s lives and lives of the people in the countries that they move to. </p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01388888889 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.52830262807 2.80592935109 161% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505555555556 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.577980063 49.4020404114 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.5 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143248862236 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819228833866 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316960533644 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143744370642 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.17 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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