The charts show gross sales in five departments in the years 2010 and 2012.
The pie charts reflects the differences in revenues of five categories of products in a department store over the course of 3 years. Clearly the company's decision to hire new leadership to alter the store's sales trajectory has led to increased trade to everyday items and a decrease in big-ticket items.
In 2010, the electronics and fashion departments accounted of 65% of the store's gross revenue; by 2012, this number had dropped to exactly half of all sales. Although electronics remained the highest grossing department, it nevertheless showed the greatest overall reduction at 10%. Furniture, the other big-ticket item, saw sales shrink by more than half over the 3-year span falling to 4% from 10%.
Grocery items and housewares, meanwhile, increased significantly, jumping from 10% and 15% respectively to 23% each in 2012. For groceries, this is a jump of more than double the previous sales figure. This confirms a shift by consumers to more staple goods and everyday items, furniture and groceries each contributed to 10% of sales in 2010, with inverse changes in 2012.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17613636364 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88805761851 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6876973678 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292691315543 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102402701507 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517221458653 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166522431369 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526577775236 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.