Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
success is subjective. it leads to ones satisfaction. satisfaction pushes people to their limits and in the end they either achieve it or destroy themselves. But if anyone asks me, there is bliss in reaching for success even when the result could be a huge failure. this is why, any successful person take risks. just for that release of dopamine. To find a purpose for their lives.
The very first reason to compensate for risk is exploration. since the beginning human beings were curious creature. they have this habit of poking things around just to see what might happen. In business, main reason explore is to identify what does people or the consumers need. A risky venture, when done intelligently, opens up further roads that were clouded by a person's insecurtites, their fear or even consciences. Tesla Motors, a company that started with an idea to manufacture an Artificial intelligence driven cars. they did not had any reason persue such unimaginable dream. when they first released their prototype, it opened up many doors to improve its features and add new ones.
The second reason could be,simply, because they can. A successful person is, often, also rich. Availability of an investment creates a cusion for them to soften their fall if their adventure did not lead to gold. A sense of fearlessness. The best example of this could be none other then the program to produce reusable rockets. A Rocket's purpose is to power a shuttle so that it can reach the final frontier. SpaceX, another company that is ran by the ceo of Tesla,were experimenting with this concept for several years. The reason behind it was so that humans could save time building rockets. when this project became successful, it inspired others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96575342466 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71892790678 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633561643836 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7760710478 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4166666667 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112483693113 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311303649793 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296973393191 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771970374156 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254200250384 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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