a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Today's youngsters form the future of a better nation. The growth of the nation and prosperity of the nation depends on the values and morals it provides to its youger generations. A nation should make its students to study the same national curriculum in order to meet the requirements of the country.
Every country differs from each other historically, economically, geographically and in many other ways. The nation's requirements are based on the problems the society is facing and fighting against. A country might be needing scholars to proceed more scientifically whereas another nation might be needing better health servants to treat the unconquerable epidemics of their region. A national curriculum sublimes all the necessary subjects and fields which a student should know to serve his/her country for the better.
For instance, countries like Africa get benefitted little with business graduates with less knowledge on their surroundings but the same nation's state may ameliorate when students who understand the environmental sciences and the need of the country come together and join hands. The increasing literacy rate will ebb the nation's problems in one way or the other.
A nation can implement the curriculum with more of space science when its in dire need of astronauts. A drought prone country can put efforts to teach their children on better farming and conservations for a better tomorrow.
Looking it in another way, the young minds may not be having enough clarity on what to pursue. A generalised curriculum may help them to experiment the fields at hand and then follow what they are more ardent about. The national curriculum not only prepares them for the future but also will help them guide in choosing what they want to do in college and shape them a better human.
However, a very rigid curriculum may not allow the students their freedom to learn what they want to always. It can't always be assured that a standardised curriculum imported on every student can bring the best out of them. Nevertheless, the bigger benefits and a probable better future may out shadow few minor drawbacks on the larger scale. recapitulate the above argument, the primary duty of a citizen should be towards his motherland. and a citizen can only work for his nation when the needs, morals and kwowledge is planted in his heart and mind at a young age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...g and fighting against. A country might be needing scholars to proceed more scientifically...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ntifically whereas another nation might be needing better health servants to treat the unc...
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Line 10, column 102, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...heir freedom to learn what they want to always. It cant always be assured that a stand...
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Line 10, column 113, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...m to learn what they want to always. It cant always be assured that a standardised c...
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Line 10, column 113, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...m to learn what they want to always. It cant always be assured that a standardised c...
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Line 10, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recapitulate
...ew minor drawbacks on the larger scale. recapitulate the above argument, the primary duty of...
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Line 10, column 441, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...tizen should be towards his motherland. and a citizen can only work for his nation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04822335025 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77085880781 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527918781726 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9443237672 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.684210526 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352921182104 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113608029254 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123669458569 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189390107653 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131008724359 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.