As gender discrimination is sill existent in most parts of the society, there is a claim that women are not as competitive as men. While competitiveness is undoubtedly indicated more significantly by men, it should be ranked at the same level between both genders.
A higher level of competitiveness of men can be seen in many aspects of life. In terms of employment, men are still an overwhelming majority of workforce, eventhough women have played a more important role in our economy than ever before. In different fields, ranging from bussiness to politics, men in general achieve higher results and posititions than their counterparts. This difference between genders can be explained as simple as males are more favourable in many parts of the world. In some Islamic countries, Muslim women still encounter discrimination in various domains as men are the superior, dominating every aspect of Islam culture. Additionally, with such biological duties like giving birth and nourishing children, women are much or less restrained from higher education or career, thus being labeled as the less competitive gender.
With all the difficulties that female face, their competitiveness is undeniable. Nowadays, given the opportunity to compete equally as men, women have proved to be ambitious competitors in various fields. Taking sports, what is once known as for men only as an example, more and more women are taking part in and even outperform their counterparts. Such sportswoman like Serena Williams, with her mindblowing record of 23 Grandslams has proved that women are the faces of tennis. Women are now capable to do well in every given task, from housewife to politician and soilder, not to mention all their sacrifices to their family.
In conclusion, it is a misconception that women are born to be less comptitive than their counterparts, due to gender discrimination and family duties that they face. In my opinion, competiveness has nothing related to gender, but instead it depends on the mentality of its owner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...adays, given the opportunity to compete equally as men, women have proved to be ambitious ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, well, while, as for, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23926380368 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12959812644 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7754591987 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.866666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231621485965 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781602107112 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041309580272 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137676301901 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508134915672 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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