Write a letter to colleagues asking for help with your presentation-explain when and where the presentation will take place, what is the content of the presentation, what kind of help is needed.
Hello Tope,
How are you doing and how is work? Guess what, I have been nominated to make a seminar presentation at the next hospital clinical ground round which is slated to come up on the 25th of march,2014 at the cardio- renal hall by 10:00a.m.
The medical director with all the top management committee are all coming for the presentation and I will be talking on current management of low back pain. Presently, I am at a cross road because my laptop just crashed, meaning my presentation has been wiped off from the system, and since you are a computer engineer and also a guru, I belief you should be able to help in retrieving all the information on my laptop.
I have also informed Bimpe on the need to make sure the letters typed in inviting different secondary school students get to their principal, because we need to enlighten the public.
I will be glad if you can see my issue as been urgent,will be expecting a feed back from you soon. Thanks for always been there,lots of hugs and kisses.
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because my laptop just crashed,
because my laptop is just crashed,
I will be glad if you can see my issue as been urgent,will be expecting a feed back from you soon.
I will be glad if you can see my issue as been urgent, and I will be expecting a feed back from you soon.
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No. of Different Words: 120 100
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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