Generally speaking, I believe that it is more enjoyable for all concern to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours, particularly for those jobs which need a lot of concentration.
First of all, it is very challenging for people to concentrate strictly on the work for a long time. Humans, unlike electric driven machines, are not able to work from morning to the night. Especially when they are doing painstaking work like programming, calculating, they need to relax after a period. Even though they just struggle to work very long without a stop, they will certainly feel very exhausted. Moreover, not only the quality of the work but also the accuracy of results will be affected. As a result, their leaders will punish them for both the mistakes and the low quality, it will never be an enjoyable thing for them.
In addition to the difficulty of long-time concentration. I think it is not healthy for people to work at that pace. It is true that some people can manage to do demanding tasks for very long time without a break and the results are excellent. However, this action is undoubtedly unhealthy. They just neglect the need of relaxation and intentionally force themselves to avoid being distracted or feeling tired by drinking coffee. This is OK for several days or a week, while no matter how strong the man is, it is not possible for him to work very long a day continuously. He will soon feel sick and become anxious about everything. Then he will need to see the doctor and have an unpleasant and money consuming experience.
Finally, having longer free time may not be beneficial for relaxation. Their relaxation time need to be divided scentifically or may have a negative effect. If they only need to work three days a week, which means they have four free days. This time arrangement just switch people from an extreme to another extreme. They are too tired during the weekdays, and they will also find they do not have the need to relax for so long. They cannot have a rest at an appropriate time.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above. I am of opinion that in most cases it is actually more pleasant to work five days a week for shorter hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, i think, in addition, as a result, first of all, in most cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68974358974 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66287822611 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535897435897 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6814831806 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5217391304 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78260869565 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32769765924 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912380324002 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108716402606 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230740169243 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128294645939 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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