You had lost contact with a friend, but you managed to get his/her contact lately and decide to write a letter. In the letter
Explain how you got hold his/his contact
Explain why you want to contact him/ her
Ask question about himself/herself
Dear keshvi,
It’s been so long since we were last in touch. But I have not forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together. I am writing to tell you that I had lost your contact so was not able to be in touch for so long.
Recently, my phone got crashed due to some virus and lost your number as well address. As you are not using Facebook, I somehow managed to find your elder brother on Facebook. Fortunately, he remembered me and lended me your contact number and address.
The reason I needed to be in touch wit you is that I am getting married on 25th December 2019. Moreover, my wedding would be incomplete without your presence. As you have always being with me since childhood, I want you beside me as I am about to enter the new phase of my life.
Additionally, give me details about your arrival so that I can arrange tickets as well as accommodation for you and your family. And how many years old is your son?.
Give my regards to your mom and dad. I can not wait to hear from you soon.
See you soon
Hima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not able to be in touch for so long. Recently, my phone got crashed due to so...
^^^
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... reason I needed to be in touch wit you is that I am getting married on 25th Decem...
^^
Line 14, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear from you soon. See you soon Hima
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31979695431 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38443638204 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598984771574 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3788567838 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7857142857 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217859230009 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770159879357 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664582253569 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112094138504 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029028431987 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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