It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In recent decades, choosing an independent lifestyle has gained an increasing rate among youngsters, causing some public controversy. Although this decision comes at the expense of the family’s rapport, plenty of evidence suggests that the opposite is true.
there are a number of reasons why this pattern exists. first, since living away from home in urban areas are more ethnically diverse than living with family in rural ones, the likelihood of cultural exposure among people with different values and belief systems is higher. For example, people in various areas have different cultural norms, which potentially is conducive to greater experience about life. second, since metropolitan areas are more densely populated, citizens have more opportunities and resources to start a better career. this means that even though those who cannot compete with the other few successful would have myriad of job seeking chances, which cannot be happened when being reliant on the family.
On the other hand, there are a number of reasons why leaning toward family can lead to reactive development. first, since it is convenience when living with family without housing rental concern, younger people are not motivated to afford a new house even if the current living condition is degraded. For example, in Hanoi, many young couples choose to live with their parents after married in the old Town even though it still remains lots of limitation in daily habits, which potentially creates conflicts among family members. second, the different conceptions between young and old generation in the family could bring controversy when fostering a new-born baby. For example, in order to have the most appropriate methods in raising children, it feasibly gets family members into unnecessary arguments, that explains the reason why many young married couples choose to live on their own.
In conclusion, the fact that living away from the family should be encouraged thanks to the benefits for better future development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40189873418 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61395278435 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2753404006 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.307692308 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174693835193 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598044189919 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606978418746 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111232518853 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592871365792 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.