Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, climate change has been posing a myriad of threats to mankind, hence some people argue that we should try to coexist in lieu of tackling it. Although this idea appears attractive, the disadvantages will far overshadow the upsides.
On the one hand, global warming could be alleviated with some feasible approaches. First, since climate change is largely shaped by human activities rather than nature itself, humans plays an integral part in mitigating this problem. Plenty of science evidence has shown that gas emission from factories or the overuse of natural resources leave carbon footprint into the air excessively, which are the main culprits for greenhouse effects. Second, by investing in renewable energy, the government can make a huge impact on tackling global warming. This means that with the proliferation of technology, some alternative energy such as solar power, wind power, can be used to replace nonrenewable sources, which helps prevent fossil fuel depletion and address air contamination.
In addition, trying to live with climate change only render it disastrous. First, if human only concentrate on dealing with the consequences of global warming in lieu of changing their current lifestyle, they are contributing in spoiling the environment. For instance, the habit of using plastic on a regular basic is degrading the environment, because plastic waste is not biodegradable and release toxins when is burnt and buried, which implies people need to stop using it. Second, global warming’s consequences are significant, thus the idea of coexisting with it is in vain. For example, one of the consequences is ice melting which causing the rise of sea levels, leading to the loss of habitat due to land decrease, which is beyond human’s ability to tackle.
In conclusion, it is clear that some measures should be adopted to address clime change. By changing current lifestyle and utilizing clean energy, human can do wonders for the environment.
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- Sport is becoming a business with high income for professionals and more companies have involved in financial and in other ways It is a positive or negative development 78
- Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas Why do you think that is What can be done to reduce the crime rate 67
- The technology development has affected social relationships from person to person Do the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negative aspects 89
- The range of technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor To what extent do you agree 80
- Nowadays the rise of consumerism has become a hot topic Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32698412698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86542010901 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3602026279 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163951966276 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557406374306 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053024628736 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097333633306 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163342499514 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.