Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, governments and environmental organizations have been having a pressing problem which is climate change. While some arguments say that we should find a way to live with climate change, others claim that we should focus on preventing it. In my opinion, I suppose that we should prioritize implementing appropriate strategies and actions to prevent climate change and reduce its significant impacts on human life and the environment.
We can see that humans are finding potential solutions to adapt to climate change and improve our lives. For example, in the agriculture sector, many experiments have led to the invention of new plants which have outstanding properties to help them survive well in dramatic climate conditions. Additionally, people are gradually shifting towards using renewable energy like solar or wind power to replace the traditional one, which aims to decrease harmful emissions to our lives and ecosystems. However, choosing to live with climate change is a dangerous idea when its consequences have been more severe to anticipate, and climate change also will make our planet uninhabitable.
It is not surprising that climate change has resulted in a serious impact series to the Earth. Naturally, global warming is one of the main reasons causing climate change. Global warming has made the increasing temperature, and this has led to the low rainfall in some places in the world. Obviously, this has been an opportunity to prompt the drought, which has caused direct effects on our health when fresh water and food resources have been at risk. Moreover, climate change has caused the ice sheets to melt and the sea levels to rise. And the result is that some major cities in the world have been submerged in water.
In conclusion, it is important to acknowledge that finding ways to live with climate change is also one of the consequences of this global issue. So we need to raise our awareness and implement practical actions to mitigate the risks posed by climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14329268293 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81457595736 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9494934415 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265298338623 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940092605773 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757408967433 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178809329441 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597781216921 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.