You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different
nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting
him to publish information about this:-
- What activities you have planned
- When the first meeting takes place and where
Dear sir,
I am writing to request you to print about the regular social gatherings starting from next week in your newspaper which will involve members from diverse geographical backgrounds the main purpose of this is to encourage people to understand and respect each others culture and heritage
The meetings will take place on first Saturday of every month at the hotel 'Caravan' during lunch time. However, kindly mention that the very first meeting will be conducted on 24th July at the extravagant event 'Oorja'. Although the registration for the same will remain open from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m. the gathering will start at 7:00 p.m.
this meeting will involve a number of exercises in order to attain its objectives. Firstly, every month a member will be chosen to narrate his or her tradition, rituals, and festivals. Thereafter, a group discussion will commence vis-a-vis the problems faced by them in this Cosmopolitan City followed by lunch. There are many more activities which I have planned, but it will take time to implement them.
Please contact me if you need any more information to publish this article
Yours faithfully
Jipsa Jadwani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...he gathering will start at 7:00 p.m. this meeting will involve a number of exerci...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more information to publish this article Yours faithfully Jipsa Jadwani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0942408377 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63277393414 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717277486911 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.398574971 44.8134815571 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.0 76.5299724578 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184108718749 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758084438639 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662435409171 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123218102587 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064420154587 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 8.37731958763 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.