The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007
The table gives information on the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers for two years, 2006 and 2007.
Overall, in both years, the consumptions of HP and Dell was sightly rose higher than that in the other companies, while the number of Fujitsu-Siemens was lowest in 2007.
The number of HP was 31.4% in 2006, this number gradually went up to 34% in 2007. The company Dell increased from 16.6% in 2006 to 20.2% in 2007, through Acer declined sharply from 11.6% in 2006 to 10.7% of all notebook computers in 2007.
The other companies fluctuated small share of the notebook computer market. While Toshiba raised from 6.2% in 2006 to 7.2% in 2007, Lenovo dipped minimally from 6.6% to 6.2 %. The data of Fujitsu-Siemens fell steeply from 2006 to 2007: from 4.8% to only 2.3% of the market.
Other notebook computer reduced from 22.8% in 2006 to 19.3% in 2007 of the market. However, the other notebook higher than all the companies except both HP and Dell.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54209112174 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2856554967 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402037440095 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203200021085 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188692678257 0.0843802449381 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268790117692 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.21012971586 0.0819641961636 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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