"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
In this modern era, education plays a crucial role in making a person morally upright. Moreover, it prepares him for the competitive world. Many successful people have told that education should become the right of person, Education is pivotal for any to country develop. However, I partially disagree with the author that all the students should have a same curriculum until they enter the college. It is necessary to know every child is discrete and they have different fields of interest. Each school have disparate amount of resources to teach child. Only if the field a child is trying to pursue is same, then we need to have general study curriculum.
First and foremost, it is said truth government schools can never provide the resources that private schools can provide. Since, the funding allotted for the private school is high and it is properly organised compare to public school. For instance, private schools are equipped with all types laboratories and it has all types of playgrounds necessary for different types of sports. It is completely different for government schools teachers are not regular and there is no proper class rooms , laboratories to teach students.
Secondly, every child is unique and has different field of interest. However, in this cruel world, we need to discover our area of interest as early as possible and concentrate ourselves in that direction. However, if we generalize, the curriculum a child will not have sufficient time to invest on his field of interest. Since, there is limited time in school he cannot cover all the areas and then allot time for himself. For example, children who want to pursue there careers in singing they start this from very small age like 2 or 3 years. By the time they grow they get self sufficient enough to fight the competition.
Lastly, If the area in which a student wants to pursue his career is same then it should have generalize curriculum, which could be attainable for all the schools. For instance, there numerous boards in our country each state has his own board and two national board like icse and cbse.
To sum up, we need to a child a sufficient time to know his area of interest and find a generalize curriculum which could possible for all the schools. It should have generalize curriculum, which could be attainable for all the schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ferent fields of interest. Each school have disparate amount of resources to teach...
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Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt fields of interest. Each school have disparate amount of resources to teach c...
^^
Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gular and there is no proper class rooms , laboratories to teach students. Seco...
^^
Line 8, column 95, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'generalized'.
Suggestion: generalized
... his career is same then it should have generalize curriculum, which could be attainable f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 262, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'board' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'boards'.
Suggestion: boards
...tate has his own board and two national board like icse and cbse. To sum up, we ne...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 87, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e to know his area of interest and find a generalize curriculum which could possible for all...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 168, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'generalized'.
Suggestion: generalized
...ble for all the schools. It should have generalize curriculum, which could be attainable f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92191435768 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6203078988 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486146095718 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9406063615 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0476190476 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173995347303 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055270098828 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495838100516 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102351673992 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297475812539 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.