One of the controversial topics today relates to whether art is an crucial subjects for school children or it is only a waste of time. In this essay, I am going to shed some light on this question from both points of view.
On the one side of an argument, there are people who argue that art plays a significant role to build up creativity in every children. It must be a mandatory subjects in primary as well as secondary level. Nowadays, large number of people give more priority in subjects like art, dance, culture and other extra-activities because art is an all about imagination of anything on paper. Moreover, today's children share their emotions and ideas through painting and drawing things on paper. For instance, many youngsters express their love and emotions to their parents and loved one by creating birthday card or by creating their sketch. Therefore, art is actually imagination of something which directly connected to our emotions. Hence, I personally believe that it need to be a compulsory for each and every students in school level because it helps to broaden our mind and increase our own creativity level.
On the other hand,there is possible to make an opposing idea, people often believe that art is just a waste of time for children. People often have this opinion because children from school and college level already have burden of many other subjects like science, history, social, math, etc. so that they are unable to handle all the areas simultaneously. Sometimes, due to various subjects children might suffer from depression. And, I think that we need to focus on those area where we find more opportunities in upcoming days. Thus, In today's world subjects like science and technology made a miracle so we must focus on science as well as management more than any other subjects.
To sum up, both the arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I strongly believe that art should be essential subjects which increase our creativity as well as helps to convey our thoughts through pictures or symbols.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... topics today relates to whether art is an crucial subjects for school children or...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'subject'?
Suggestion: subject
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... creativity level. On the other hand,there is possible to make an opposing idea, p...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
.... And, I think that we need to focus on those area where we find more opportunities in upc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00867052023 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67500343102 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7516963997 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315173118054 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866942208081 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748889471949 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181011832708 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681736792058 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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