Many people believe that when their children read books for entertainment they are wasting their time and they should only read serious educational books what is your opinion ?
A number of people think that spend time with storybook is worthless and they ought to read only subject related books. In my opinion, i believe that fiction books and subject related books both are significant for children.
To begin with, some parents believe that fiction disconnect the reader from the reality of the world and encourage them to live in a fantasy world of their own. When children read comic books, its impact their mind and they try to behave like that, characters. In this way they do not able to differentiate virtual world and real world. In addition to this, it is better for a child to interact with real people than to spend time with entertainment books, which is not useful for to get good job in future. Thus, child should read only subject related books, which is useful for enhancing their intellectual growth.
Further i believe that, story books for young children better for stimulate cognitive development. When children read comic books, it's enhance their imagination ability and they do not feel bored, when they read that books. Following this, it's also create interest for reading books in their spare time. Moreover, shared reading books with children is a unique opportunity for parents to bond with them. Children feel happy when they get entertainment books and they shared experience with their parents, what they read with that books. So story books play the vital role to make strong bond with parent and child.
In conclusion, although serious books good for child world information and their better future, but fiction and comic books also useful for creativity and imagination power.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01831501832 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40635644264 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.743953305 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483268034993 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18640858138 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946942094017 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303511875178 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953230087103 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.