Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The development of a country depends on their own citizens and their personal development, people should be careful enough to build their economic and social stability. One of the group claims that education system is the main reason for a country's success while others insists that education alone cannot decide the country's progress, there are other key factors along with the academics. I strongly agree that education alone cannot develop one's country, there are other factors which has astonishing effects on country's performance.
On the one hand, many parents suggests that their younger generation should be given quality education which improves their lifestyle when their children become adults. Firstly, children should be encouraged to go to school and excel in their academics with flying colors. Secondly, children should be motivated by their parents to acquire their graduation from a reputed university because children should be competent enough to get their dream jobs. Thirdly, these children were not having time to get exposed to any social or extra curricular activities as their parents think that education is the most important factor than other engagements.
On the other hand, most of the parents states that there are other dominant aspects which foster the country's progress. For instance, even though there are emerging graduates with potential skill sets exist, there is no job opportunities after their graduation. Moreover, there should be an industrial development for every country which makes its citizens self-sufficient and not dependent on others. Furthermore, the government should bring more development plans for the welfare of the people who contributes the overall country's development.
In conclusion, although education system is important for an individual and overall success, there are other measures which has to be considered for the welfare of the country. Academic degrees is of no use if there is no scope for employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51147540984 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75324733143 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7553393916 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114424801162 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503061589082 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489176117661 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801193434874 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510843732338 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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