In many countries count of cars is higher than any other vehicles. Firstly we have to take look at why the number of private cars have increased in these recent years furthermore we can see its effects on global warming through pollution. In this changing world having car is prestigious thing. Everybody is wishing for own car. There are some benefits of having personal cars. Number of people travelling through public transports have increased and travelling from public transport after a long, tedious day is hectic. The families having small babies and elderly people, always prefer to travel via own car. Time can be saved by starting journey at convenient time. As public transports like buses and subways have their fixed time.In arid area public transports haven't reached yet.
Because of above listed reasons people tend to drive their own vehicle. This increased amount of carbon monaxide in the air and use of fuel incresed. Carbon monaxide is green house gas and it traps heat surrounding earth surface by not allowing heat exchange process resulting in global warming. Cars releases many harmful gases if an asthamatic patients come in contact with such polluted air might get asthamatic attack.
Government can help to overcome this problem by using following measures.Not only spending more money but also some strict rules are necessary. First is, Increasing frequency of public transports at the time the time of college and office exit time. Increasing number of existing specifically reserved area for children and elder people. The govt. may bring some new rules of traffic that one can not travel alone by car. The carpooling must be done if you are travelling on same route daily. If four people are driving four different cars will surely increase pollution as well as traffic. Carpooling might help in reducing pollution, traffic and expenses also. Furthermore government can provide passes at affordable cost to students and working people will increase the possibilities of reduction in global warming. There is one more point that old cars expel more polluted air as compared to new once. All vehicle older than certain stage should be banned. To do all these things the lots of money is needed but as we consider benefits from above measures, extra expenses can be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ing car is prestigious thing. Everybody is wishing for own car. There are some benefits of...
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Line 1, column 736, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...buses and subways have their fixed time.In arid area public transports havent reac...
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Line 1, column 767, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...xed time.In arid area public transports havent reached yet. Because of above listed...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ublic transports havent reached yet. Because of above listed reasons people tend to ...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...his problem by using following measures.Not only spending more money but also some ...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the time'.
Suggestion: the time
...asing frequency of public transports at the time the time of college and office exit time. Increa...
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Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...educing pollution, traffic and expenses also. Furthermore government can provide pas...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...g pollution, traffic and expenses also. Furthermore government can provide passes at afford...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11375661376 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52068650852 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3329344333 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5416666667 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254345029196 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597699623952 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436901437359 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152598324711 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548374153128 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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